14
June
Just one day…
If I were to live just a day
I surely would find a way
To reach and spend it with you
Before I left for an abode so new.
Maybe we could be together
For just a day if not forever
But make it a real beautiful one
One to remember when am gone.
A fantasy that I live each day
One that fulfills me in everyway
For wishing forever seems futile
So just a day with you n all smiles
To make my deepest wishes come true
For what I ask of God is very few
So one day of your life just with me
To know what ecstasy could just be.
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June 14th, 2009 at 10:58 pm
i wish i could pray to give you that day, but praying wouldn’t even work!!
June 15th, 2009 at 11:54 am
@Ubaid:
Hmmm I feel prayers done with full fith do get answered and I feel i will get that one day someday
Thanx Ubee
June 15th, 2009 at 12:38 pm
i once wrote how you ve written this.
but then my emotions dried up!
and it is great to read you
June 15th, 2009 at 12:48 pm
@AD:
till when i dont know 
Appreciate your dropping by .
Thanks AD . I guess hope gets one going
June 24th, 2009 at 10:45 am
Hey Saanj,
I love the mix of desperateness (sorry for not choosing a better word) and reality in this poem. Really well thought and as always well written. The feel of a lover who is teared between his love and the other duties he has to fulfill really appeals to me! I enjoyed it and I smiled at it.
June 25th, 2009 at 7:29 pm
@Anil:
Thanx for dropping by Anil and Glad u liked it.
Hmmm yup i suppose there is desperation here