Just one day…

June 14th, 2009

If I were to live just a day
I surely would find a way
To reach and spend it with you
Before I left for an abode so new.
Maybe we could  be together
For  just a day if not forever
But make it a real beautiful one
One to remember when am gone.
A fantasy that I live each day
One that fulfills me in everyway
For wishing  forever  seems futile
So just a day with you n all smiles
To make my deepest wishes come true
For what I ask of God is  very few
So one day of  your life  just with me
To know what ecstasy could just be.

No Responses to “Just one day…”

  1. Ubaid says:

    i wish i could pray to give you that day, but praying wouldn’t even work!!

  2. Saanj says:

    @Ubaid:

    Hmmm I feel prayers done with full fith do get answered and I feel i will get that one day someday :) Thanx Ubee

  3. AD says:

    i once wrote how you ve written this.
    but then my emotions dried up!

    and it is great to read you :)

  4. Saanj says:

    @AD:
    Thanks AD . I guess hope gets one going :) till when i dont know :) Appreciate your dropping by .

  5. Anil says:

    Hey Saanj,

    I love the mix of desperateness (sorry for not choosing a better word) and reality in this poem. Really well thought and as always well written. The feel of a lover who is teared between his love and the other duties he has to fulfill really appeals to me! I enjoyed it and I smiled at it. :smile:

  6. Saanj says:

    @Anil:
    Hmmm yup i suppose there is desperation here :P Thanx for dropping by Anil and Glad u liked it.

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